Book 2 Preview and Peer Feedback

Tony and I continue to make steady progress on The Adventures of Princess and Goose Book 2: Sir Logan and the Witches. After completing the preliminary page layouts for all the pages and getting about half the book colored, I sent my book out for a peer review of the manuscript through the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators. At the same time, I sent my next (unrelated) book to a professional author for a manuscript review. Getting feedback is never easy, but I found the honest and constructive feedback immensely helpful.

In total I received comments from four authors across the two books. I was able to review the feedback in its entirety and apply comments from both books to Sir Logan and the Witches. These changes resulted in updates to nearly every page of text, plus the addition of four new pages to add more action scenes to the book. Even with these updates, I should still be on track to release the book by the end of May.

Take a look at the first three updated from Sir Logan and the Witches. As always, if you enjoyed Chase Away the Dragons, please consider leaving a review online. If you haven’t purchased a copy, what’s stopping you?